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The Mariners sent Brad Miller, Logan Morrison, and Danny Farquhar to the Rays in exchange for Nathan Karns, C.J. Riefenhauser and outfield prospect Boog Powell.
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Selig Could Rule On As Move To San Jose By End Of Year - RealGM Wiretap
The Athletics badly want to move to San Jose, where they feel they'll be in a better market, but the Giants don't want their American League neighbor stealing their fan base and revenue stream.
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There have been indications that Selig could finally rule on the move by the end of the year. However, rather than say yes or no, the commissioner appears to be considering a ruling that could challenge both the A's and Giants to fulfill certain criteria.
Stanton Working To Become More Complete Player - RealGM Wiretap
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Chase Utley has hit well since coming off the disabled list last week and contenders remain interested.
Utley is 5-for-13 with three doubles and three RBIs in four games.
The Chicago Cubs, San Francisco Giants and New York Yankees all had scouts at Monday night's game between the Philadelphia Phillies and Arizona Diamondbacks.
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